Mello Ms. Barbs,
I'm Grimm, and I'm here to help you get started with your first article. Please have a look at the changes I made to your article, including the addition of some tips and suggestions at the end.
If you feel you could add to them, please do. You'll also see a header I put in part of the way down, as your article didn't have one.
Overall, great article and format. I'll update you more over the next days as we get more of your work online. Thanks again, and have a great morning!